Monday, November 28, 2005

Relationships are Divine

Yes, I have got sometime to spend with my blog after a months time amidst my univ exams. Here’s a poem i have written about relationships. The relationships I mean here are the ones I posses with my family and friends…


It looked like a heaven…
The place was surrounded by trees, lakes, mountains, limpid rivers…
There was a palace which had all possible sophistications in it. Serene place to sleep, Ambrosia to eat, Toys to play…
My heart filled with joy and it started to sing a song as loud as it can…
But that happiness was only impulsive. Soon I felt something was missing out there…
I got that! There were no humanbeings except me!!
The joy turned into a melancholy all of a sudden…
I felt a twinge in my heart and the intensity started increasing exponentially…
Oh my god! Where have I got caught??
Where are those tender shoulders which holds me when I need them badly…
Where are those gentle arms that lifts me up whenever I fall and need a renaissance and give me a friendly pat…
Where are those mind appeasing words which makes me feel energetic when I go dejected…
Where are those pellucid smiles which always has one meaning,” we are always there for you ,don’t worry”…
Where are those exquisite souls who are adept at changing the worst lugubrious situations into blissful ones…
Oh my god! Where have I landed?
That was no more a heaven to me...
The palace looked like a bitch’s home…
The ambrosia became tasteless…
I yelled and cried out of agony…
Suddenly I felt as if somebody was shaking me up…
Oops! That was a dream! No that was a nightmare…
I thanked god a trillion times…
Those tender shoulders, gentle arms,appeasing words, pellucid smiles , exquisite souls were all with me .I didn’t lose any of them and at any cost I don’t want them to…
The omnipotent, multifaceted almighty resides in all the relationships, no matter how petite they are…
The nuances and the intricacies makes me wonder and agape many times…
My heart feels an unbearable pang when a sacrilege is done to any relationship I posses. Remember, relationships are divine…

4 comments:

Selva said...

hi suba,
a nice poem abt relationship
selva

சுபலலிதா said...

Hi selvam,
thank u for ur compliment

Anonymous said...

hai sublu,

we went thro ur poem.
Really its very touching.
I think people who fly to abroad just for sake of money leaving their relations should go thro ur poem.

சுபலலிதா said...

Hi anitha!
nice to see ur comment. Thanks for that.U may be right.... But ppl in abroad know the value of relationship more than us da.Keep commenting....